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Let Me Cry

Let Me Cry  -Gavidi Srinivas  +918722784768 ,9985010538

The moment I remember you
you will be down poured
as my tear drops
When I look at the cloud
you will be stretching your hands
from the cloud.
When I look at the flower
you will be smiling
in the flower
When I touch the wall
you will be questioning
What you are doing
But your physical presence is a myth
Let me cry
until my heart is frozen-ed.

© 7 months ago   

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Adrian Waldorf - Good, super, but what is up what your goal is?

6 months ago   reply   like

Lili the Poet - Your poem is very sad and your longing for someone who is gone forever is filled with wish that this separation should never become alive but life and death are true mystery s and they woud always stay like that for us people.And still till we keep our loving ones in our memory Read more →

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Of the sky - In the last line, 'frozened' should be 'frozen'. Also it appears that you have a formatting problem, as some lines are capitalized as if meant to be read in stanzas. Otherwise, good write and good imagery.

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Reschea Woodall - Lovely share.

We have moments and memories of someone from our past. Loved how you brought out the reminding of that person through everyday things.